A story I wrote on the bus

Otsoay is a dino. He is 9. He eats twigs. He has a frend and he has a big sister who is 17. His sister is called anna. He used to live in a big house. He had a sore neck. He was 5 when he had a sore neck. He is 10 tomorrow. He is having a b'day party. His mum is called Ellie. He is going swiming for his b'day. Ann Delfie Mel and Dave and Danny came. Dave had a toy car. Danny had some lego. Ann had a toy snake. Delfie had a trumpet. Mel had a drum. His party was at K-------. He had a monster party. They all dressed up as monsters!