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Cardinal’s Birthday Party
Today Cardinal was going to be 4 and he invited Cepalop, Marly and Marlin and Wobbegong and Tiger Shark and Orca and Salmon, they all got carried in.
They all got carried to Cardinal’s birthday party in a fishing net and when they got there they saw that more were there, like Mummy Orca. They couldn’t believe their eyes- Mako Shark was there too as well as Fishily. Fishily was just a baby fish, he really liked his big brother, Fang. Both Fishily and his brother had fun playing together with games like ‘Tag’. “I’ll tag you” shouted Fishily and Salmon just splashed up from behind her brother. “Oh hello, blow your bubbles at my brother” said Fishily, “OK” said Salmon but he couldn’t. “I’ll tag you” shouted Salmon and tagged Fishily. Wasn’t he clever at playing tag, good old Salmon! He tagged Fishily’s brother. Then he swam off, when he swam off something dreadful happened, something had caught little Orca. Out of a fishing net came Little Orca, he had swam all the way to the fishing center. “Whoops” said Little Orca. “You should have told me” said Mummy Orca. “Little Orca” said Carnidal, “where were you?” She was having so much fun at Cardinals birthday (splash splash), they even splashed me. They splashed the water in the ocean with their tails and fins. “Hello Mako Shark” said Cardinal, “watch this” said Mako Shark and he got out his torch and he dived under a rock. “Wow” said Cardinal “my mother taught me to do the ‘hip”’, “wow” said Mako Shark and that is more or less the end.
Cardinal was going to be 4 today, he got some little fish biscuits and a tin of sea salt to pour into the ocean and a tin of octopus food for his friend Octy. Cardinal was very happy until he met his friend galloping along the sea bed, he swam up to say hello. Then his friend vanished! Then Cardinal whizzed up to say hello but his friend was gone again. Then he gave Cardinal a kiss, he thought it was the rock that was moving but it was actually Gallopy, it was the horse who had kept moving, not the rock!
But what about Tiger Shark? Some facts about Tiger Shark. Tiger Shark came to hunt for Salmon, Cardinal blew some water at Tiger Shark and then he swam away looking sad that he couldn’t eat Salmon. “That was a good idea wasn’t it”, said Salmon.
“What a great idea” said Cardinal clinging to a branch floating on the ocean. Cardinal balanced with Salmon. Salmon wobbled and fell into the ocean just as Tiger Shark swam up and ate him all up. Cardinal simply fell down off his branch and pushed Tiger Shark, but he still had Salmon. Tiger Shark liked Salmon and decided he would never eat Salmon again. The fish then all got carried home in the fishing net they came in. The End! What a good party! “Oh wow, look at all my presents” said Cardinal, he had invited so many people that he had so many presents.
Cardinal’s Birthday Party
Today Cardinal was going to be 4 and he invited Cepalop, Marly and Marlin and Wobbegong and Tiger Shark and Orca and Salmon, they all got carried in.
They all got carried to Cardinal’s birthday party in a fishing net and when they got there they saw that more were there, like Mummy Orca. They couldn’t believe their eyes- Mako Shark was there too as well as Fishily. Fishily was just a baby fish, he really liked his big brother, Fang. Both Fishily and his brother had fun playing together with games like ‘Tag’. “I’ll tag you” shouted Fishily and Salmon just splashed up from behind her brother. “Oh hello, blow your bubbles at my brother” said Fishily, “OK” said Salmon but he couldn’t. “I’ll tag you” shouted Salmon and tagged Fishily. Wasn’t he clever at playing tag, good old Salmon! He tagged Fishily’s brother. Then he swam off, when he swam off something dreadful happened, something had caught little Orca. Out of a fishing net came Little Orca, he had swam all the way to the fishing center. “Whoops” said Little Orca. “You should have told me” said Mummy Orca. “Little Orca” said Carnidal, “where were you?” She was having so much fun at Cardinals birthday (splash splash), they even splashed me. They splashed the water in the ocean with their tails and fins. “Hello Mako Shark” said Cardinal, “watch this” said Mako Shark and he got out his torch and he dived under a rock. “Wow” said Cardinal “my mother taught me to do the ‘hip”’, “wow” said Mako Shark and that is more or less the end.
Cardinal was going to be 4 today, he got some little fish biscuits and a tin of sea salt to pour into the ocean and a tin of octopus food for his friend Octy. Cardinal was very happy until he met his friend galloping along the sea bed, he swam up to say hello. Then his friend vanished! Then Cardinal whizzed up to say hello but his friend was gone again. Then he gave Cardinal a kiss, he thought it was the rock that was moving but it was actually Gallopy, it was the horse who had kept moving, not the rock!
But what about Tiger Shark? Some facts about Tiger Shark. Tiger Shark came to hunt for Salmon, Cardinal blew some water at Tiger Shark and then he swam away looking sad that he couldn’t eat Salmon. “That was a good idea wasn’t it”, said Salmon.
“What a great idea” said Cardinal clinging to a branch floating on the ocean. Cardinal balanced with Salmon. Salmon wobbled and fell into the ocean just as Tiger Shark swam up and ate him all up. Cardinal simply fell down off his branch and pushed Tiger Shark, but he still had Salmon. Tiger Shark liked Salmon and decided he would never eat Salmon again. The fish then all got carried home in the fishing net they came in. The End! What a good party! “Oh wow, look at all my presents” said Cardinal, he had invited so many people that he had so many presents.
Thursday, 5 February 2009
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